The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent dialogue and visual images of the MC in anguish, and the strong message of God's persistence at the door of our hearts, no matter what!very well done!
Very powerful and moving story that held my attention from start to finish. Excellent message in this well-written entry.

God bless~
Oh I LOVE it. This was SO well done. I was wondering at first, what kind of Dad it was and how they'd gotten to this point, but halfway through, I realized where you were headed with it and everything clicked into place. You could add more details to this, if you want, it's nicely done and I wouldn't mind reading more of it.

Great job--thanks for sharing and good ending! I like the way the title fits into it.
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