The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/13
What an interesting and well written tale. Great job!

God bless~
So interesting! I find myself conversing with the church building . . .
I like Mystic Harbor. What a catchy name and an interesting little town. I like the idea of the bell being the MC. It had personality and humor.

I especially loved the line with the "I'm not telling" That was just very nicely done.

Lovely piece and good pacing. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
I think this is a great story. Your opening was a great grabber and your choice of POV brilliant.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in your level and 35 overall!