The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 501 times
Member Comments
This is a great story. Worried moms can be from any era that's for sure. I really liked how this makes me think about the responsibility Mary must have had. I think you do an awesome job of showing that.

You had quite a few little errors (mainly with quotation marks) but hopefully they don't subtract from the story. I always enjoy a good twist and you kept me going with this one. You covered the topic in a fun, fresh, and meaningful way. Great job of stepping outside of the box with your POV.
A really cute story! Indeed, it is hard for a first-time Mom. I'd never really thought of the parents of Jesus living with the responsibility of raising the Son of God. You did a great job of making me think how it might have been for them, especially Mary. Thanks!
How warm and precious! Thank you for taking us into Mary's heart . . .
Congratulations on your HC -- unique take on the topic. Blessings to you.
Yay! Happy Dance!! You did a great job. :-)