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Pride truly goes before a fall. A joy to read from start to finish. Lessons on humility taught ironically. Wow.
Oh this is delightful! You had me from the get-go. Your pacing was perfect, though at times it felt just a tad bit drawn out, but you used that time to build the suspense expertly. I had an inkling that he might be wearing a toupee but that just urged me on, eager to get to the ending and you didn't disappoint one bit. The last line was fantastic and had me chuckling out loud. Bravo!
A timely reminder and one of value to all who read your wonderful entry.

Nicely done. God bless~
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