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Lovely piece, with beautiful reminders we all need. Enjoyed this. Thanks!
Awww...simply beautiful!
God bless~
I think you did a lovely job with this beautiful poem. I like how it starts from a place of darkness and despair but then quickly changes to light and hope once we realize we need Jesus in our hearts.
You have written my heart. Thank you . . .
I love the line where you say (paraphrasing)" I know it's not the stopping, I fail that every time but You look within and see this heart of mine." God is so amazing like that. It is just a good thing that we aren't God, harsh critics that we are. True repentance is important but He will bring us victory when we cling to Him. He know our true hearts and He is mindful that we are but dust... Thank you for this thoughtful piece.