The Official Writing Challenge
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I clicked on your story because of the title (which is what my own piece is about this week). That word ties in very well with your closing Scripture verse. My favorite stanzas were the 3rd and 4th ones after the Genesis verse at the beginning. They seemed to really capture the restless spirit of our times! Good job! :)
Nicely told and written. The message along with the lovely scripture choices were certainly a timely reminder for all.

God bless~
The title says it all. Six days we are to work, but on the seventh we rest. You did a great jog in pointing that out. Keep writing and God bless.
I truly enjoyed this. I think you had a fresh and creative take on the topic. I reckon about everyone can relate to this. Nice job.
This truly appeals to me, as His Fourth Commandment is so joyous! He knew how busy we would be! Acknowledging His Rest/Sabbath is holding Him highest as our Creator! Thank you!