The Official Writing Challenge
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Man, that was sum cool story! I wuz sure ya wuz just messin' with ma head. Dun know where ya wuz headed. Got kinda anxious when the dude in the white dress let go and ya fell. Thought ya wuz in hell for sure. Real cheered ya made it through - and knowed it wuz God talking to ya.

Loved the voice.
Fantastic. Surprisingly readable and the dialogue/voice was well done. Great job.
A very interesting and deep story...very intense.

God bless~
Your message came through loud and clear in a different type of language I am used to. You made your point convincingly.