The Official Writing Challenge
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A very touching story and I loved the change at the end.

God Bless!
This is splendid! You did an outstanding job of developing the characters. I felt like I could almost hear the squeaky wheel on the shopping cart. Your message is one I think we all need reminding of from time to time. I wish I could somehow let you peek into my heart to see what a huge difference you made in there for me. Today has been a really hard day and your story was like a balm soothing my irritated and tender heart. God bless you and thank you for listening to God when he gave you this story. You made a huge difference in my outlook today. :)