The Official Writing Challenge
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This was touching, poignant and filled with truths of LIFE. It was such a pertinent message and well-written.

God Bless~
Love the title, and love the application of this week's theme.

This is a well-written, moving piece (I'm ready to open my wallet...) and you did a great job of showing, like in this phrase here:

"The strain of the event was pounding through her words."
Well written about a very genuine need. I like the way you presented it - not preachy - just asking for introspection and discernment.
Wonderful message in your story. If only every city could open a 'Butterfly House'...this issue is dear to my heart! Well done.
Written after my own heart....just a beautiful story and well written, thoughtful and humbling.

Thank You..

God Bless,
Very moving in its scope and its depth. Loved the title, and the brief speech which summed it up so well, as a positive expression of what a "megachurch" may do when a smaller church would be swamped by the need.
Love, especially, the line "one butterfly at a time." Enjoyed this very much.