The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/12
Beautiful and touching. I could see the entire scene in my mind's eye. Thank you.

To join in a "picnic" with Our Lord and Savior, what a glorious day that will be.

God bless~
Yes I so agree with the title. I could see, hear and fill this banquet with Jesus. You did an outstanding job pulling the reader into the story. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
Absolutely beautiful!
This is a nice retelling of the familiar Bible story. You used some great descriptions setting the scenery for the reader. Good job.