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Topic: PICNIC - deadline 7-12-12 @ 9:59 AM NY Time (07/05/12)
TITLE: Not an Ordinary Picnic
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Ellen arrived at the picnic park site around 11 in the morning. The air was fresh and still cool. She placed some of her items on the picnic table, sat down and looked around at the area. She loved this park because it had so many wonderful memories; being here with her mom and dad, sister Julia and brother Alex. As she looked at the beautiful elm tress, bushes and wild flowers she also remembered happy times with Jim. This was one of their favorite spots and many hours they strolled together talking about their plans for the future.
She checked her watch and saw that it now was 11:15. She began to worry.Jim was always on time; in fact he was always kidding her that she was always late. What should she do? Should she call him, or just wait a bit longer? She decided to wait. As she sat there waiting, she noticed a figure about 40 feet away and it appeared to be either a very thin, tall man or a thin and tall young women. She couldn’t quite tell; the person was too far away.
Just as she was ready to go back to her car, she saw Jim pull up in his blue Toyota. She waved at him and signaled him to where she was.
“Hi! Sorry I’m late. Got held up in an emergency meeting at work and had to stay. Nice place for a picnic. Brought some beer, iced tea, and pretzels and I’ll bet you have the rest.”
“Yes. I’ve got everything ready. Let’s eat! I’m starved and I’ll bet you are too.”
Just as Ellen began pulling out more of her picnic menu for the day which included potato salad, lunchmeat sandwiches, baked beans and apple pie, the object—she now saw that it was a young man—approached their table.
“Hello. Sorry to barge in on your picnic but could you spare maybe just a sandwich? I lost my job two days ago and I’ve not had anything to eat.”
Ellen and Jim noticed that he looked tired and worn out and his clothes looked like they had been work for more than two days.
Normally, Ellen and Jim were weary of strangers; especially when they appeared in a park but he looked so lost and forlorn that Ellen decided to make the first move after getting a “go ahead look” from Jim.
“Well, we don’t know you but as Christians, we are told to help another when we can. Here, have a sandwich, a piece of pie and some iced tea.”
They all had a wonderful picnic, shared their faith and Ellen found out later that he did lose his job, lost his wife and came close to ending his life. Weeks later he found a good job at a local newspaper and she and Jim felt good what they did that day.
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