The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for taking us on this journey with you! I could definitely imagine it. One tiny thing: Change " thought your nose..." to "...I thought my nose..." Other than that, this was lovely and made me want to be there.
The second person kinda bothered the flow, but any discussion of El Y in PR interest me, ah, the odors from that great rainforest are so wonderful. Thanks for sharing a memory.
Awww...I wanna go!! Thank you for sharing in such a lovely way!
God bless ya, littlelight
Ok. This wasn't a story. This wasn't a poem.
Um, it was a nice message though and opens the doors to so much possibilty and imaginings inside ones mind.
Thus, it will probably leave an impression on those who read it and job thoroughly done.
Who knows? I might be dreaming of the rainforest tonight. (but the ones in North QLD, Aus are totally the best in the world)