The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. I loved the characters and was drain in immediately.

When using the word Okay either write it out of capitalize both letters. Be careful not to give away the ending with your title.

I loved the ending. I didn't see it coming at all and that doesn't happen often. This was a delightful read.
05/25/12
Thanks for this lively and meaningful story. I loved the title and the ending! Great job. God Bless~
What a delightful story. I loved the title and when we first start to witness we do need training wheels. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
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Thank you that this piece indeed witnesses.

I like what you did with this story and the twist that comes with it.

Also, this is a very helpful reminder that we need to be fully about our Lord's business to get His gospel spread.

May we strive steadfastly and in earnest to be DOERS of God's Words...and to let our lights shine as witnesses that we are children of the day.

Light always outshines darkness. Glory to GOD!
05/31/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations on placing 23 overall!