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This was an incredible story. From beginning to the goosebump ending. I loved it. What an inventive and clever way to approach the topic at hand. Loved this! Great job. Thank you.

I loved how "Jesus joined them and clapped" for the Father! Perfect. Amen.

God bless~
Amen! Your story made me smile, and tugged at my heart.
This is beautiful. I do have goosebumps. Newman reminds me a lot of my mom. I think you did a fantastic job on bringing Newman to life. You delivered the message of love without coming off as preachy or sanctimonious. This is a great story.
Greetings -

This is a sweet precious and delightful read.

Thank you.
This is a beautiful story and very well written. A great message of how what we do now is perceived in heaven.
Congratulations! Nicely done. God Bless~
Congratulations on your beautiful ribbon and for ranking 11th overall! So close!
Daniel, I'm going to feature this on the Front Page showcase for the week of June 18. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Daniel,I just posted your article in the showcase and I love it. We can make a difference one person at a time sharing the good news and loving the lost. Thank you for writing this. God Bless, Mike