The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful piece of poetry with a deep and thought provoking message.
I love how well your poem flowed. It rhymed, but was not forced, and it started out with a question/problem and ended an answer. Bravo!
Beautiful poem which spoke volumes. Nice flow, and great messasge. Good job, thank you.

God Bless~
This is a well-written piece that so many of us can relate to. You did a nice job with the flow and being on topic.
This was a beautiful poem and one that spoke volumes. I truly enjoyed this so very much. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
I really enjoyed your poem and its message. Well done.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!