The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/05
This jumped around a bit, and repeated its own timeline. But the message in the last paragraph was lovely--that should be the desire of all of us!
11/02/05
I almost think the paragraphs should be re-ordered to avoid confusion and avoid the staggered feeling. The last sentence needs to stand as its own paragraph.
blessings - dub
11/02/05
It's amazing how the tiniest of smells can remind us of events both great and insignifigant; sad and joyous. For future reference: a space between paragraphs would help for easier reading of your wonderful stories:)
11/02/05
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on fragrances that are significant in your life. I did enjoy your thoughts in the end. God bless you, littlelight
11/04/05
Truthfully, it rambles...and I lost interest early on; however, it made it's point about smells of life. Keep on keeping on...