The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww. This was so beautiful, it touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes.

What a lovely held strong convictiion, enduring faith, and lasting love.

Thank you so much.

God bless you~
A beautiful, well crafted story! Loved the title :-). You did a great job of showing how love prevails even when one part of the cord is missing - only possible when God is intertwined.

Your descriptive writing shines through in every paragraph. Just one minor note. You had a wonderful ending and did not need the last sentence. You might have added it to the fourth paragraph, if you needed to include it.

A great entry!
Congrats! God Bless~