The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - this story needs to be reprinted in a Christian magazine. Get an editor, tighten it up and send it on, more folks should read it.
Loved it and especially the way you linked it to Scripture at the end. Agree with Dub. Well done!
Well-done! It made me shiver to read it, so well did you capture the whole setting. Beautiful ending.
I guess this is why I don't go camping! But, if I did, I know the Lord who created all creatures great and small would protect me! Lovely article:)
I really enjoyed your story, especially the parts about piranhas and being glad you weren't the man of the house. :0)
I agree with Dub, too. This is a GREAT story - and well-told. You've painted a vivid picture for us, with a poignant reminder of God's loving care.
An amazing adventure! Well told!