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Nice job with the topic...Beautiful messages sprinkled throughout the story. I enjoyed this. Thank you. God Bless~
I loved your story. It had a good message to all. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
Thanks for sharing your article. It is on topic and very interesting. The most important appointment of our lives and only God knows when we need to be there. I think that helps me remember to be ready at all times.
I enjoyed this devotion. You did a nice job showing examples from life and then moved on to your message.

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The prayer was really lovely. Though many have written similar stories this week, most quoted the verse in Hebrews. It was nice to see you make your point using a different scripture.
I thought this was very creative...a mixture of prose and poetry. And who could not appreciate the topic, the coming of Jesus. We do have a wonderful appointment to look forward to...
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!