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Beautiful! You have me grinning from ear to ear.

Yes, once-trampled trust is so fragile. You've shown Jackie's vulnerability and Jacob's more mature love so well. I get the sense that Jacob will teach Jackie how to relax into trusting his devotion to her as the years go by.

I love the last sentence. "That's my Jackie." it shows Jacob's feelings that Jackie 'belongs' to him and forgiveness of her distrust all at once. It also shows that he has a glow of love that won't be easily quenched by misunderstandings.
This is a sweet story. You drew me in with the lilac bush as that was my safe haven at home. Then the part about not trusting men pulled me in more. The ending may have been a tad predictable but it is a lovely romance.
Awww.. I loved this whole entry. And, I especially loved the last line! Great job. God Bless~
Oh, I love this, especailly the end. Fits well with Valentine's Day also. :)
What a romantic story, and I enjoyed reading it. I like reading about happy endings and this did not disappoint. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
What a sweet story! How often do I believe my eyes rather than listen for the truth? Nice work.
Great story! It's romantic and funny, and the ending brings everything together so wonderfully! :)
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