The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well done. This kept me in suspense, wondering where the embarrassment was going to enter the picture.
Beautiful job of keeping the reader in suspense, wondering. Nicely written, and the ending said it all. Good job! God Bless~
Small town living at its best. Nice story, and the ending is just right.
Ahh, embarrassment left to the very end. I was wondering when you'd bring it in. Nice job.
This was a very good read with very good descriptions.
Great story, very believable...and as the toilet flushed you could imagine Pastor Larry’s face flushing as well! Enjoyed this read!
You pulled me in to the story and kept me all the way to the flush. I never saw it coming. Good job.
This is a cute story. My son is planning on becoming a minister and funerals really scare him. Nice job of setting up the story. Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!