The Official Writing Challenge
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Your words are so true. Good job!
I really liked this. Nicely done- Thank you. God Bless~
Great advice throughout.

Watch the possessives and comma placement.
Strong words that might turn many people away from reading its message. But if only a few read it and embrace it, and their lives change it is a treasure! I am reminded of the rich man, turning away from Christ when he asked him to lift up his cross and follow Him. He turned away from everlasting life! I loved your story...thanks for sharing.