The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story filled with a great message and a happy ending. I love those!

God Bles~
A sweet story and skillfully written. Very enjoyable. God bless.
This is a sweet example of how misunderstandings can balloon into something huge. You had a very interesting beginning. I think you were weakest on topic. Though you mentioned the words, they really didn't have an impact on the story. You did a great job with the ending. It left me feeling satisfied and gave me something to think about.
This is such a sweet story. You painted a lovely picture of a girl being comforted by her grandmother. Hugs and cookies and grandma's loving touch all draw the reader into the story. Good "showing".

One tiny thing. "Whipping" should be "wiping".

You have a great beginning that dew me in and I love how Jill appears in the end. Wasn't expecting that. Nice ending and great writing!

Loved the title!
Congratulations on your Highly Commended!
This was so sweet a story, I am so happy you received recognition. Congrats on your HR placing. God Bless~