The Official Writing Challenge
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I love a rainy day. :)
Nice thoughts and I liked the flow.
I noticed a couple spots where apostrophes weren't needed, and where "your" should have been "you're." But I enjoyed the message. Good writing - thanks for sharing.
Good job on consistency of rhyme and meter! Nice message in this poem. Be careful of apostrophe usage, and the commonly confused your / you're. Very sweet poem.
I like the last two lines (well, I like it all, but I really like those two lines) Exactly my sentiment! Perhaps, instead of calling it "Rain" you could call it "Alive". Thanks for sharing!
Nice poem. Jan, you were quick to catch the your/you're mistake. The rhyming pattern is consistent and not contrived. Best wishes with this piece. God bless. Karen