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Very cute! I'm sure I've been guilty of all the above at one point or another. I love to cook, but I hate to grocery shop. Its that much worse if I have my three children with me. I do have to say I find your punishments a bit harsh.:) Glad there aren't actually grocery store etiquette police, but I will be more careful about reading my list as I shop.:) Good job! A fun read!
07/29/11
This was fun! But now i'm going to be paranoid. lol So guilty of the second one.
08/02/11
Charming commentary on our common human experience.

You were able to fill your lines with the exact emotional tone we have all had in the shopping adventure.
08/02/11
I fall into a few of these categories, I do admit, although I always take care of my cart. Cute entry. I hate cooking, too -- yuck but I like to eat!
08/02/11
Very interesting! You must insist that the store manager has a list holder attached to the trolleys, an alarm system at in the centre of the aisle that activates if someone lingers for more the 30 seconds and a car park with enough space to do a three point turn in and have its own trolley park attached.
08/02/11
I used to have these same anger issues! But now my husband does the shopping. :) A fun rant we can ALL relate to.
I enjoyed your commentary on shopping carts, but I must admit I love to shop and cook, and since I have such a good "forgetter," I always make a list before I go.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level two.