The Official Writing Challenge
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A modern telling of a biblical story. It took me a second to get into the rhythm, but once I did, I really enjoyed it. Great job!
Your story is like a slide-show retelling of a very old story with a modern ring of truth. Nice job!
Interesting account of David's "sin." Good job of recreating it with this story. I loved it. God Bless you~
An interesting viewpoint for a familiar story. Well done.
Great entry. I liked the different POVs

The first paragraph seems to be a different POV from all the others, and it threw me for a bit.

Great job with this one. Biblical fiction is one of my favorite genres!