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You tie screaming in pain, amazement, and sorrow together very well in this depiction of 'this side of paradise.'
Your point, that the angels on the other side will never know these experiences provides an excellent contrast to the two different sides of Paradise.
This is excellent Unusual perspective well presented - Truth penned with some very vivid scenes and thoughts to ponder within! Enjoyed!
Congratulations, Shanta.:-)