The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh how gorgeous. I just love Ty. I wasn't exactly sure what Ben's and Lauren's roles were but it didn't distract from the story. I did enjoy the ending - quite unexpected - and giggled over the neighbour. Well done.
Wow - what an unexpected ending! I agree with Julianne - that neighbour was just classic! Well done!
I am speechless. My older son has Asperger's Syndrome-a form of autism. He is very intelligent but I wonder how he will be in the world on his own. Only God knows my pain as I struggle with his future. But, it is all in God's hands like it always was, and I try to rest in that. No matter what, like Ty, God will never leave my David alone! With tears, thanks for sharing!
Very touching. So glad that God found a heart in Lauren and Ben to make Ty's life more secure.
I loved it the first time I read it and knew it should place! Way to go!

Donnah, your name in the winners' list is starting to become quite familiar. Well done on your 3rd place in the Level 2 awards this week, but also, you ranked 12th overall (out of 135 entries). So well done! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Well done, Donnah. A richly worded story with a delightful twist. A blessing to read and deserving of your win. Congratulations