The Official Writing Challenge
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i so love retelling of bible stories and this is a good one :-) thank you
You described the woman's thoughts and feelings well, but I would have liked to see some action or dialogue as well. But your message came through very well.
Being a mother of 3 girls, I identify so much with this mother. Lovely writing of this age old bible story.
You brought this story to life. Well done.