The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very powerful and is a strong reminder to 'spend' time with our kids. I feel this is easy to read and had a good pace to it, I wanted to keep reading. I'm so pleased it ended with reconcilliation, too.
Far too often parents don't realize hew ignoring a child can lead to devastating results. Beautiful poem.
Good job! I appreciated the thought behind this, as well as the verse at the end. Well written!
Excellent poem. I'm glad the MC realized all the opportunities he was missing, bonding with his son.
well done! i missed this the first time but i can see that it is a winner
I agree with an earlier comment - this is powerful stuff! It never ceases to amaze me that 26 letters in an alphabet can be arranged skillfully to change a person's thinking, heart - life!

Thank you for using the gift God gave you for His glory!