The Official Writing Challenge
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03/04/11
aww a real tear jerker.... a well told story and you did so well to tell it through the child's eyes. I am glad that the
supplementary showed her to have become a happy well adjusted child, i would love to know more... which shows how well you crafted the story. I liked the way the "flies" flew in and out the story.
03/06/11
Absolutely a tear-jerker. And the ending brought hope. Nicely done!
Thank goodness for kleenex. I wanted to reach out and hold little Janie so badly. You did an excellent job telling the story through little Janie. I was happy the story ended on a happy note. Good job and keep writing.
03/09/11
This really was a tear jerker. Some things are difficult to understand. I'm glad Janie kept hope alive.