The Official Writing Challenge
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Like like your MC's voice. Creative and interesting. Thanks for sharing.
This is a sweet story. I do believe sometimes people had on to life just long enough for their loved ones to be ready for the grieving process.

I noticed a few typos week instead of weak and some missing apostrophes to show possession.

All in all, it was a nice story with good characters that I could relate to and fell in love with. Nice job!
So tender and sad, but also a gentle loving story of the end of ones life upon this earth. Very well written and keep writing.