The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Great thoughts- encouraging words. Thank you for sharing.
This truly is a beautiful poem and each word so true. Every moment is sacred and blessed if spent with Jesus. Thank you and keep writing.
Love the imagery presented in this poem of yours. Well thought out and presented.
Good flow and meter.
Well done.
02/20/11
I love that line, "Just as we are about to give up, Jesus comes and carries the cross for us."

How true!
Congratulations for placing 10th in level 2.