The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written with good dialogue.
Sad times when loved ones are parted due to war. Luckily in this case a happy reunion!
02/11/11
I enjoyed this story - especially the happy ending.
This is a sweet story. You did a good job of capturing the characters' feelings.
02/12/11
Great dialog, well written! I have a tender heart for our soldiers! Thanks for the great story!
What a tender story. An excellent well written piece and the ending was perfect. Thank you.
02/13/11
Very good. I liked it all the way through. Good job.