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You made your car troubles sound interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Enjoyed your story. It flowed well. Recently my 20 year old Ford Escort just took a sudden death. In less than 24 hours it was replaced with a 10 year old Ford Taurus. It is amazing how God steps and supplies our needs, just when we need them. Keep writing.
Well done. Your story flowed nicely. Keep writing.
I like your POV. It's interesting to think how it could relate to our life. If you had enhanced that a bit, many people could likely relate to it. Sometimes our bodies may seem perfect on the outside, but if our inside is broken, then we are like your poor car.
I truly enjoyed this. My daughters Ford Taurus died in the middle of I-20. I can relate and I loved how you used your car to tell an interesting story.
what a lovely piece of writing. the affection for the car came over with some lovely turns of phrases and you tied in the Christian theme too, short and sweet :-)