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10/10/05
To wait to pick up the pieces must be very hard indeed. You made me feel your anguish and your hope.
Such a tender, raw and honest piece, yet you never allow the emotion to choke what is being expressed. Tighten the editing just a touch, otherwise an excellent and timely piece that would worthy of a wider audience. God bless.
10/11/05
You've done a very good job of communicating your despair for your friend, and your determination to win her back through prayer. The connection with "flowers" is very tiny, though. Blessings on you and your friend.