The Official Writing Challenge
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01/21/11
a lovely story.I enjoyed reading this but i think if you gave your character a name rather than just using "she" it would really bring your character to life. The repetition of "she" marred an otherwise truly lovely story.
don't be discouraged and it is fun thinking up names once you get the hang of it :-)
while reading your poem, i reflected on the different seasons of my life! Many of your written sentiments touched home. In the current season after many years i am being a little selfish with my time and now write daily praises to Him who has walked with me every step of the way. I see that you are also doing the same. A great poem!
Life is full of changes and hard times but your story shows that through God's grace we can endure and we are all beautiful in his eyes.
01/29/11
You documented the seasons of this life so well. I love the scripture reference also. We can choose to have this kind of beauty.