The Official Writing Challenge
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lovely i like the descriptions of the beach and the change of summer to autumn and then the changing seasons from mourning into a new life..... you managed to weave both themes together so clevely that i was there on the beach with her .
I like the title and how you weaved it into the story.

Perhaps more showing or flashbacks of memory would strenghten the emphasis of the message.

Love the beach and your descriptions.

I could relate to the sadness of the mc. When my mom died I thought I'd never recover. But somehow God gives us the strength to go on.
I loved the title and how you wove it throughout the story. The beach with the changing of the seasons was so tender.
You painted a lovely beach- front scene complete with equally lovely memories.
Great writing.