The Official Writing Challenge
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yay ! it is good to know that as Christians in at all times and in all places Jesus is there leading us through great poem
A beautiful moving poem!
I really liked this poem it remind me of a line from one of my favorite songs.- "Lord, Teach Us To Pray it's been a long and cold December kind of day." Your words are a great reminder that Jesus is always with us.
An absolutely beautiful poem on a day in your life. Very well written and inspirational.
Barb, this piece touched me so much. How true that one day can have different seasons. I'm not good at hearing rhythm but I think you should have someone who is an expert at poems help you editabit then submit it to a greeting greeting card company. It would be perfect for the front of a card. I'm sure your could think of a great one or two lines for the inside. This is such a beautiful poem and would be perfect for something like that!
Congratulations, my friend, for placing 6th in level 2!
Congratulations on placing so well this week, Barb. Your poem is beautifully written, and I love the way your theme was in the second line of each verse.