The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/11
What happy memories this woman has to think on. Very good descriptions and I love the ending. Nice job!
01/20/11
lovely :-) it almost seemed like a fairytale with the princess in her castle....
01/21/11
How lovely is the scene you set and the images you painted with your words. I enjoyed reading this immensely. Thanks for sharing.
01/22/11
What a bitter-sweet story. But I feel for the family she is waiting to visit.

This brought tears to my eyes.
I so enjoyed this lovely tale. I could easily picture the staircase and the old home that was full of joy and sorrow.
I enjoyed this read very muchThe ending was poignant, yet one felt the timing was perfect.
Truly touching story filled with such wonderful memories of Ms. Catherine. I loved the ending. It was perfect.
Thanks for the article. It is an interesting read for me - from the beginning to the end. And it ends so well.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!