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This sounds like a place I would love to visit - especially in the winter. Nice descriptive writing.
Sweet story. God bless you in your writing for Him and have a Merry Christmas.
This is a very interesting story and a wonderful place. I noticed a few mistakes, but I liked the idea of the story. Thanks for sharing and Merry Christmas.
Good description of the character and feel of Mountain Ridge. So many people want that feeling, but without the effort or responsibility.

I enjoyed the story.
a lovely story about a lovely place.... is it a real place i wonder as it seems almost too good to be true.It is interesting that communication problems with the "outside world" can make people more reliant on the local relationships...
could of course go either way... reminds me a little of a radio programme I have just been listening too about some of the ice stations at the poles
Your story would make an enjoyable movie! Very sweet!
Mountain Ridge sounds like an enchanted place! I especially love your comment about all the "new additions" that would be on the way after the long winter - cute!

It sounds like a lovely place to live. I think it might be great for many communities to be cut off from the rest of the world.