The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/10
I really love this poem--wonderful structure and rhythm, and a strong message.
Wow this is so intense. It took me a read or two to fully grasp it. Nice job.
11/22/10
Very interesting, with good rythum and powerful message.
Wow! Great job. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! You are improving by leaps and bounds. Your hard work and determination is really showing.
11/25/10
Wow, this is amazing work! You message is excellent. Congratulations on your Editor's Choice award!
11/29/10
Very sophisticated poetry with a strong message. Congratulations!
12/04/10
This is very good indeed. My one observation would be that the superscript right at the start is a bit of a distraction and could easily have been omitted. I admire your creativity