The Official Writing Challenge
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I really love this poem--wonderful structure and rhythm, and a strong message.
Wow this is so intense. It took me a read or two to fully grasp it. Nice job.
Very interesting, with good rythum and powerful message.
Wow! Great job. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! You are improving by leaps and bounds. Your hard work and determination is really showing.
Wow, this is amazing work! You message is excellent. Congratulations on your Editor's Choice award!
Very sophisticated poetry with a strong message. Congratulations!
This is very good indeed. My one observation would be that the superscript right at the start is a bit of a distraction and could easily have been omitted. I admire your creativity