The Official Writing Challenge
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Bless you for doing prison ministry, and for caring about the ones you interact with. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Thank you for a very interesting story about prison ministry. Being a mentor to prisoners takes special people and I applaud those who do that. Thank you for a very touching story.
Thank you for sharing this. Your descriptions are wonderful and I love your title. It pulled me to read your selection.
I like this. It shows how important prison ministry is. My parents and their best friends used to go into a local person. A few times we kids went with them. It was scary and overwhelming at first but then once my nerves calmed it was rewarding too. Thanks for reminding me how important it is to minister to the world.
10/24/10
This is my favorite kind of non-fiction entry--one with lots of human interest to it.

My only suggestion--and it's minor--is that the two Scriptures and the epilogue with statistics kind of thudded along after the piece was over. I'd suggest one Scripture only, and perhaps the other one and the facts about prison ministry could be worked into the text.

I felt as if I got to know your 'pegs'--very well done.
Congratulations on a great placing!!!
Congratulations on your commendation. I enjoyed your story. Prison ministry is a special calling and if this is based on a true story, I highly commend you for allowing God to use you in this way! Blessings!
11/01/10
Your title really got my attention. What an awesome ministry...your love for it made your writing come alive. Great job and congratulations on your highly commended.