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I think I'd like to see the last bit of your story expanded to be a story on its own. Without going into too much "honeymoon" detail, you could make a very humorous piece about spending ones' wedding night in a dive. You are very good at writing humor.
Very fun, light hearted entry! Enjoyed it! I thought for sure there would be a fight though :)
Cute story! Ah, those wedding mishaps. What fun! You did a great job of transporting us to this wedding.
Enjoyed this light hearted account of a normally sressful time! I think a more obvious break between the two events makes an easier read but it was fun anyway!
Nice read. Ditto the above.
Great story! I noticed that your handcuffs were plasticc--much better for the air plane metal detectors, hehe!
This was very fun to read. It made me smile.
So cute! Light and contemporary style, easy read.
Fun! Is this true?
I think we all have a story about what went wrong at the wedding/on the honeymoon. Loved your light-hearted retelling. Keep writing!