The Official Writing Challenge
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I was touched by your story.
Thank you for a tender poignant story about a child who was lost until he found the one and only Father and he was like all who find our heavenly Father is indeed changed. Good job and God bless.
I was connecting with your characters right away. You described what can happen to foster kids very well. Then the fact that Jesse had enough wisdom to know and want to learn more about God so he could help other kids my heart just melted.
I liked your story. It's a good reminder of how we should look beyond the humaness of the people around us and seek to see their potential in the Lord.
Well written! You didn't get bogged down with unnecessary details but shared just enough to keep me wanting to know how this would end. Didn't see his conversion coming, so found this to be an extra pleasant perk to this wonderful story.
I really love this story. You had engaging, dimensional characters and a great premise. Lots of story to pack into so few words! Well done!
I think you did a very good job with this article. It flowed perfectly and the topic was well depicited. Good work
Congratulations, Joyce, on your 1st place for this wonderful story - and a success story at that. God Bless. Nancy