The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story. Veru informative and so meaningful!
Blessings, Ruth
This is a charming story. You did a great job describing all the work that the MC endured. You had a few editing glitches- by underneath, and a sentence with a double negative. These little mistakes caused me to pause but a second. The underlying message came through loud and clear. That is what matters the most.
Congratulations on your 1st place. Your story honors those who give so much to help the hurting. God Bless.