The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
Lovely story. Veru informative and so meaningful!
Blessings, Ruth
This is a charming story. You did a great job describing all the work that the MC endured. You had a few editing glitches- by underneath, and a sentence with a double negative. These little mistakes caused me to pause but a second. The underlying message came through loud and clear. That is what matters the most.
08/19/10
Congratulations on your 1st place. Your story honors those who give so much to help the hurting. God Bless.