The Official Writing Challenge
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I to have experienced what you are talking about. When one is awakened from a sound sleep and their mind is going the speed of light one must follow God's leading.
Such vivid descriptions - and great word pictures. I could feel exactly what your experience was. Thank you.
Good choice of words and metaphors. I wanted to journey with you!
One thing that would make the journey easier - spacing. Break your thoughts into smaller paragraphs and double space between paragraphs.
It's easier on the eye and separates the thoughts so that the reader can linger a little longer on each one.
Well done and keep writing - not that it sounds like you have a choice! :)
Wonderful, vivid description of the writer's challenge. I love the comparision to a "flame". Paragraphs would have made this more polished, and easier to read. I am glad I came back to read more pieces this week because this a beautiful descriptive piece--I wouldn't have wanted to miss. I don't know where your inspiration came from, but it brought to mind Jeremiah and his God-given compulsion to speak the Word of the Lord.