The Official Writing Challenge
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Great read. Beautifully written and right on point. Good job and God bless.
I love it! We can all relate to this one. While helping a group of high school kids do a school cookbook I made the worst mistake of my writing life. I was their typist. There was a lovely recipe for "Crab Dip". It was beautifully illustrated by art students with a crab diving off a diving board. Several teachers helped "proof-read the recipe and were undoubtedly impressed by the art work and the recipe made it into 500 copies as "Crap Dip". Thankfully it could be corrected with a fine point black pen by making the "p" into a "b". Isn't it amazing how things show up after 500 copies are made?
Thank you for a true story that is a great example of why editors are needed. Keep Writing.
Enjoyed your story. A good lesson here for all writers who want to improve. Thanks.
Cute story. How true that sometimes one word can make such a difference.

Aahh...that's sad. When the MC was trying so hard to encourage the teacher and strengthen her. A touching story, well written.
Sharon, this story tickles me, and I'm going to feature it on the Front Page Showcase for the week of August 29. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
I enjoyed the compelling way you told your story, and smiled at your omission. This was so much fun to read. :)