The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful retelling of this biblical story. It carried me along with its dramatic development. Well done.
Some of your paragraphs are separated, and some are not. A little more white sapce, please! You captured well the emotions of Peter and the disciples. Good job.
Well written story!
You did an excellent job re-creating this well-known Bible story. Congratulations!
Shannah, I was acting as a judge for the Bon Voyage challenge, and when your entry came through in the semi-finals I made this note next to it, "Brought this story to life wonderfully well. Put flesh on the bones and gave me tingles."

I can tell you, I don't get tingles when I read something very often, so be encouraged. I was very impressed. Keep up the great writing and I'm sure we'll see you in the winners' list again in the future. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)