The Official Writing Challenge
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That's sweet - touched my mother's heart! It's also a good comment for the pro-life position.
A mother does love and connect to her child immediately. A message that makes women think.
Wow! This was beautiful. I loved your descriptive writing as seen through a child inside the mother. Keep writing.
Yes, this truly did touch the mother's heart in me. Good writing. Thanks.
I guess because I am not a mother I did not get this until I read the comments. Needs some work and the topic is very light but I now see the intent.
I like the unique structure of this poem.

It's perhaps light on the topic of this week.

I'd love to see this as a bulletin insert, perhaps for Sanctity of Life Sunday.